She had never heard that sound before. It was oddly off pitch and a bit far away, like when you hear your mama calling you while you’re swimming underwater. She strained to place it – human? animal? who knew – before shaking it off and emptying the dishwasher. The news was playing in the background and, shocker of shockers, shit was hitting the fan yet again. Time to switch to Spotify.
She dropped the still dripping Tupperware into the sink while idly wondering when someone would design a dishwasher that managed to actually dry Tupperware along with everything else in the darn thing. That and washing crusted eggs off of forks would be two remarkable technological advances. A cat flittered by tossing the yarn ball toy from her Christmas stocking followed closely by a dog intent on stealing said ball and drooling it into a puddle of bubbly spittle. And there’s that sound again.
She wandered into the hall, tilting her head, trying to follow the noise to its source. She wandered past the phone she’d misplaced, a radio left on, but the sound still scratched at her subconscious. What was it?
That’s when she remembered the kid.
Linda hosts Stream of Consciousness Saturday. This week’s prompt is “the first 3 words of the first full sentence.” 1. Grab the closest book to you when you sit down to write your post. 2. Open it to a random page. 3. Locate the first complete sentence on that page. 4. Use the first three words of that sentence to start your post, then take it from there–write whatever comes to mind. That’s it! Have fun!
Super story. Where’s the rest?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Seemed like a cliffhanger kind of night. 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
I can understand that for sure,
LikeLiked by 1 person
Grabbed me and made me wonder where this might go!
LikeLiked by 1 person
What a great compliment. Thank you!
LikeLike
Excellent story! It need a part 2!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, JoAnna. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
that is quite a scream of consciousness – wet tupperware right on to misplaced kids… what ever you are drinking put down the beverage container and step back ! darn no table…
LikeLiked by 2 people
Yep, that one went a little sideways. 😆
LikeLiked by 1 person
Excellent stream today – I’m with you on wishing the technology in a dishwasher could do those same things. And remembering maybe the kids could just rinse the dishes before loading ’em into the dishwasher? Maybe that’s not the kid you were talking about……………. Happy Saturday to you!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Happy Saturday, Shelley! There are lots of dream dishwasher skills I’d love to see. “Scrubbing off that mystery substance on my kid’s plate” definitely falls under that.
LikeLiked by 1 person
LOL – Maybe try a Scrub Daddy sponge? I find myself enjoying the dirty task with ours. 🙂
LikeLike
Very nicely done, Laura.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Dan.
LikeLiked by 1 person
woah!
LikeLiked by 1 person
😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is a great piece, Laura.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
Need part 2 now. Really good.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks. 🙂
LikeLike
This is good, so what happened next, you can’t leave us hanging? But you are aren’t you ? 💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
It’s like those annoying cliffhanger movies that send you home wondering. 😆
LikeLike
Yes it is 💜 as the saying goes keep ’em wanting more 😜
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’ve written it so well. I felt as if I’m in a dream sequence.
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙏🏼 Thanks, Sadje. This was different for me.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome Laura. It is!
LikeLiked by 1 person